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Tardigrade_Sonata's avatar

Also felt it was a peculiar choice of title, but glad it reminded me of this: https://youtu.be/Bj1DZKOeZhI?feature=shared

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I'd never read Lish, or thought about the genealogy of "showy disjunction" outside of engaging with Language poetry and New Narrative stuff (whose techniques have I guess been mainstream for a generation--"her uncle invented the room" etc) but yeesh I hate that Delillo paragraph! I don't know what's in or out but yeah parataxis and the poetry/prose of artful gaps between little declarations (by which being a good reader is meant to mean being attuned to how to fill them in, and often so supply the pathos and significance to these apparently lifeless fragments) ought to go... I have tried in the past few years in the essays on Howard, Foote and Sontag especially to work on sentences as big and exciting as theirs, learning especially how Foote imitates Proust and Faulkner--and there seems like disappointingly little discussion in at least what contemporary criticism I see of what authors' sentences are doing and how they could be otherwise...

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