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Brett Puryear's avatar

Appreciate the response to my 'pro' side of the MFA discussion in the Republic of Letters. The adverb thing irked people the most. When I say "I'm especially hard on my adverbs," I'm just saying I pay a lot of attention to them. Is this the right move? Could this be better? I recently took another pass editing a story of mine and found three adverbs within a single short paragraph, looked them over, and thought, Keep!, and moved on. I liked the rhythm of the paragraph. Getting rid of those adverbs would've betrayed that rhythm.

I'm very in the middle on these things. I learned a lot from Carver, but I learned a lot from Faulkner. (I think the strict adherence to a single POV maxim is absurd.)

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Secret Squirrel's avatar

Thanks for the shoutout!

But how can you be so wrong about The Ambassadors!? It is one thing to blame Alice Munro's well-structured short stories for MFA stuff, but is poor Henry James to blame for the restricted third person POV they evidently teach people? You can't reduce him to the techniques imitators extract from his books (although he's unfair to the Russians etc. but everybody's unfair).

Strether isn't a passive sensorium, his sense of himself as a moral and aesthetic being depends on Chad and Madame de Vionnet, and theirs comes to depend on him. He does act, giving up two chances at marriage in order to protect their strange three-sided relationship (of which Chad proves unworthy), above all for Mme. de V.: how could he marry Maria Gostrey when he's truly in love with her!

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